Friday, January 11, 2008

Feisty Females

Ever have one of those heroines who just won’t cooperate? The female in my current wip keeps turning in to one totally feisty bitch. She’s supposed to be taunting the hero, enticing him, daring him to take what he wants, but so far her manipulation consists of derogatory remarks to his masculinity. Time to rethink the dialogue.

Doesn’t Eva retain her femininity while pulling off that man hungry quality?
And even little Mandy seems to have that “wait til later, baby” look.
So, my question to you is, how do you make your heroine strong without creating a monster?

Sunday, January 6, 2008

I'm Back!

Yes, I know I only talking to myself at this point. My fault totally. I'm not a great blogger as you can see, but I shall endeavor to do better, I promise. To make up for it, how about a hottie?